User:Cawna89/History of leprosy/NoahErdac Peer Review

General info
Cawna89
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cawna89/History_of_leprosy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * History of leprosy

Evaluate the drafted changes
Complimentary
 * The information presented is concise and easy to read.


 * The content is up-to-date.
 * The tone stayed neutral.
 * The content added is relevant to the topic.
 * The content is backed up by reliable sources.
 * The draft contains citations with accessible links.
 * The draft is laid out in an appealing way.
 * The draft contains a lead.
 * The content contains different sources.

Critical

 * There are some minor grammatical and punctuational issues.
 * Instead of starting the two sub-headings with "when", I suggest they be incorporated to the main heading of " Symptom". They could be listed there together with their contents as I believe they do not        warrant their own headings.
 * The citations should be under a different heading of "References".
 * After the heading of "Symptoms", a definition of leprosy is written; this is incoherent.