User:Cayeung/Cholestene/JellyfishFan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Cayeung
 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cayeung/Cholestene
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Cholestene

General feedback:
Order - perhaps consider putting preparation before applications, seems like a more logical order.

Notability - does have over two outside sources

Tone - neutral

Images - well captioned, good to remove the old image that wasn't actually a cholestene

Sources - good sources, seem trustworthy, all links are working

Specific section feedback
The lead - make sure to update it with the added changes. For example mention the applications and the derivatives you will cover.

The last sentence is also a little unclear, perhaps specify "examples of "cholestadiene". Alternatively, delete the last setnence, as the article is about choestenes and not cholestadienes.

The molecular information - as mentioned in the prior lecture, considering adding smile information and other indentifier keys (check butane as an example), otherwise a very good addition to the page! If there is other properties available you could add them i.e. colour, boiling point, the usual things.

Applications - interesting application, do they have any other applications or uses in science? Perhaps in synthesis? The first one could be considered a Health Concern if you so desired to add another section or had other things to add to such a section.

Preparation - the first paragraph / three sentences seem to be more related to the "use" or application, perhaps consider adding a "Uses" section and put that under there or add to applications.

Are there any other preparation methods? Perhaps add information about synthetic condition requirements i.e. do they require high temperatures, volatile compounds, long times? Are they relatively facile syntheses?

Could also add a history section if there's been developments in the preparation over time.