User:Cayeung/Cholestene/MD092022 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cayeung, Thejigglyjello


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cayeung/Cholestene?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cholestene

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall, from where the original article started the current draft is greatly improved and is much more complete. However, there are still certain things which I think could be improved further. Firstly, I feel more information could definitely be added to the lead because I personally had difficulty understanding what a cholestene is without reading the full article. Secondly, all of the images added were really beneficial and helped make the article more complete but, not very much textual information was added along with those images. Adding a bit more information with the new figures and images could be very helpful in making the article more complete. For example, a number of tables were added which contain good information but I think to add to that the values in the table could be described in more depth by a passage. Like for the stereocenter count you could maybe also touch on whether the molecule is chiral or not. Finally, I am not entirely sure but I believe that the mechanism of synthesis provided is just for adding an amino group to a cholestene instead of actually synthesizing a cholestene from say cholestane so I think showing that would be helpful.