User:Cayeung/Cholestene/Mehakk12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cayeung, Thejigglyjello


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cayeung/Cholestene?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cholestene
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cholestene

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article starts off with a strong lead that accurately and concisely describes the topic of the article. However, the lead does not mention any of the sections that are to be discussed, thus that is one portion that can be more detailed. While the content added is relevant to the topic for the most part, there are some places that are somewhat unnecessary. For instance, in the applications section, only the first sentence is about cholestene, while the rest of the paragraph can be made more relevant to the topic of the article itself. As for sources, they are all quite up to date and are present where they are required. The authors also added some images of some examples, which I found to be quite helpful in understanding the topic. Overall, the changes presented in this sandbox are indeed quite valuable and make the original article more complete.