User:Cayleeloft123!!!/Kevin Kornegay/JaidenLMcK Peer Review

General info
(Cayleeloft123!!!)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Cayleeloft123!!!/Kevin Kornegay
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):User:Cayleeloft123!!!/Kevin Kornegay

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article used bullet points and arrows instead of regular sentences. Citations needed to be added.