User:Cbakle/Monserrate Román/ShaoniD Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Cbakle
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Cbakle/Monserrate Román

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? The lead does not need to be updated. CJ expanded on her work in the NASA
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? yes
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? no
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? it is concise

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? yes- it describes Roman's career in NASA
 * Is the content added up-to-date? yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? No

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No; the article appears strictly factual
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? no

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? yes
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? yes- includes newspaper articles and websites.
 * Are the sources current?yes- they appear to be within 5 years
 * Check a few links. checked

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? It is well written and concise
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? No grammatical errors
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? The content added is well organized

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media - Peer did not add images


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? NA
 * Are images well-captioned? NA
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? NA
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? NA

For New Articles Only - Not applicable
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? yes it has, added more information about Roman and her career
 * What are the strengths of the content added? Learn more about her experiences and her perspectives as a microbiologist for NASA
 * How can the content added be improved? The article appears to be coming along really well.
 * Overall evaluation: great job in adding more information