User:Cboka/Mars Wright/Miso Raven Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cboka


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Mars Wright


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mars Wright

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

Good, concise lead. Make sure to re-read it for grammar or missing words.

Content

Relevant content, which corrects an equality gap.

Organization

The overall organization is good. The sections is well-divided. Look for grammar or typos.

Impressions

Very good article, looking forward to when put the finishing touches on it. It will be an excellent and solid article.