User:Cbsheldon/Pseudocerotidae/Diqi Yan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cbsheldon


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cbsheldon/Pseudocerotidae?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pseudocerotidae

Evaluate the drafted changes
- I like the picture, but since the original page also has a picture, you picture could be added in another section, and also the domain, kingdom ... family is redundant, as the original page also has the same information.

- You can link (Macrostomorpha and Lecithoepitheliata) to link the reader to the wiki page so they can have a general idea which order you are talking about, also it is best to use the common name (if any).

- You will need 12 primary sources for this assignment, I see none in your reference section or in the bibliography.

- Be sure to cite the resource for each sentence so readers can know where you got your information from.

- I know Dr.Stone specified that the word count doesn't matter, but your working progress still looks like a stub, with no references. Try to find other information such as habitat, life cycle, mating behavior, appearance, or any other unique characteristics of your species.

- Good luck!