User:Cbutron/Urban geography/Chelsei.L Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Username: Ash the dragonfly, Cbutron


 * Link to draft you're reviewing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cbutron/Urban_geography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article: Urban geography

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Unfortunately my fellow classmates did not draft their lead section yet but I believe that they should incorporate what is already written from the original article because it has a concise definition of what urban geography is and the role of urban geographers.

Content: I noticed that they have few main points of content and have not added anything new to the two main points of research interest and research topics but I do agree that these two main points should be incorporated into their edits because it shows the fundamental aspects of geography and the various perspectives. Additionally I think it is useful that they decided to incorporate the demographic characteristics of cities and urban pattern. However even though they did not add any new additions to this section of the article I would recommend to incorporate 3-5 cities that are prime examples of urban geography having a spatial pattern and examine the differences and similarities among these cities/places.

Tone and Balance: The tone overall seems neutral because there is no piece of evidence or claims that appears heavily biased towards a certain perspective it all informational. I noticed that so far no view points are underrepresented and over presented.

Sources and References: The two sources provided seem reliable because they are both from peer reviewed articles.

Organization: I really like the organization of the article so far because it is starting with an introduction to what the article will consist of while also including definitions of certain concepts.

Images and Media: Unfortunately there is no media provided but I believe they should add some photos to give readers an example of what urban geography is. Visuals are always good because it draws the readers attention and makes them want to continue reading an article/book.

Overall Impression: Overall I think the article is off to a great start but definitely needs some more content and revisions because there are a few minor grammar errors as well. However you guys are off to a great start, keep up the good work.