User:Cc3339/House of Priests/Rb0327 Peer Review

The lead covers all necessary information!

Heading names?

First sentence in Article Body could be changed to differ more from lead.

Add in-line citations.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)