User:Cc66816/Guerrilla Army of the Poor/Skinnyeleven Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cc66816


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cc66816/Guerrilla_Army_of_the_Poor?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Guerrilla Army of the Poor

Evaluate the drafted changes
Solid work. I'd say the third sentence of your paragraph "Although, the country suffers from extremely high levels of violence, particularly against women and girls, and very few of the crimes are prosecuted" should probably start with "However" rather than "although". Additionally, be sure to have a citation at the end of this sentence. Further, your first sentence of the second paragraph is a bit confusing. I'm not quite sure what you're trying to say there. I'd say phrasing it as something along the lines of "Still to this day, Guatemala is sees among the highest rates of violence and crime, seeing rates 51% higher than the United States." If you can find data about the rates of crime and violence in neighboring countries to Guatemala, that would be a great thing to include as well. I'd also say maybe drop the "besides an inefficient security force" and just launch into that next sentence. It seems like you've got good sources and a good chunk of written work.