User:Cclac/Dance and health/YALUWANG330 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cclac


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Dance and health


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The information is comprehensive ,but I think the definition of "boost levels of HDL" in the Physical health and fitness part should be added.