User:Cclac/Dementia/Gillianmarcuccio Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

cclac


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Dementia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dementia

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Hello!

this article is very informative and mentions a lot about dementia. I think one way you could improve the article and further develop the knowledge of the subject would be to add more information to the stages of dementia. More specifically under the sub heading "middle stages" could use some more information about that stage. I also thing that to better your article, you could do some research on the subtype of dementia known as lewy body dementia which is mentioned in the article. Some more information on this subtype would better develop this article! overall a very informative article and I cannot wait to see your final product!