User:Cclay10/Elk/Gp318 Peer Review

General info
Cclay10
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Evaluate the drafted changes
There have been no changes to the article from this user at this time. I do believe this will be a difficult article to make edits to, due to it being established and very mature. However, as I read the article I did think that the lead could have been edited down into a more precise section. Information in the lead could be taken out and expanded on in the sections that they referenced.