User:Ccolan1/Discrimination based on skin color/Amcgeesa Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

C. Colan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Discrimination based on skin color

Evaluate the drafted changes
This draft was very well written. I made sure to check out all of your links and they all worked perfectly. The way your article was written was also organized very well. It is a lot of information, but it was organized in a way that I did not get too distracted or lost in what was being relayed to me. While reading I also felt that it was very neutral, I did not feel any sense of bias while I was reading either. Overall, you have a very interesting paper and it was very pleasant to read.