User:Ccolan1/Discrimination based on skin color/Hannahm715 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ccolan1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ccolan1/Discrimination_based_on_skin_color?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Discrimination based on skin color

Evaluate the drafted changes
Most information has citations, though some lack the reference for proper citing. The lead has been updated well with the addition of the introduction to the three sections the editor is adding 'Colorism in Latinx Culture', 'Ethnical Disadvantages', and 'Assimilation'. The lead is concise and does not include any unused additional information.

Content added is relevant, but some references seem outdated and there may be newer more accurate information available for better support on the topic as sources older than 15 years may have been updated since. The topic does related to the equity gaps and touches on historically underrepresented populations. The section Ethnical Disadvantages is vastly larger than the other two sections but does not seem to contain unnecessary material and all looks to be referenced.

Content added is mainly neutral, with very few semi-biased statements all from references which could be due to out of date information from 1997. Overall good article and information to update the topic.