User:Ccolan1/Discrimination based on skin color/Kparso11 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ccolan1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ccolan1/Discrimination_based_on_skin_color?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Discrimination based on skin color

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * need to add more to have at least 300 words
 * need to add more to have 3 sources
 * delete direct quote (you're not allowed to use direct quotes)
 * need to put your sources into your bibliography so it shows as a reference at the bottom and not just the link to an article