User:Ccollins1121/sandbox

Notes: After a thorough review of the page


 * I need to update some figures mentioned
 * There were a couple of paragraphs that seem to be plagiarized, paragraph that are plagiarized need to be rewritten or edited to remove non-verifiable information - DONE
 * The use of word FOIA'd is not proper - DONE
 * There is a section dedicated to lawsuits, I need to research any pending or current litigations that can be added
 * There is a sentence in the Audits section that seem like it's an opinion - DONE
 * FOIA is misspelled in one instance - DONE
 * I need to check if the Board/Advisory Board section needs to be updated - DONE
 * I need to check on the links to see if they are still working
 * The accolades sections need to be re-written to add awards and to put awards in order of year won or awarded. - DONE
 * Rosemary Award section needs to be updated to include recent "winners" - DONE
 * The most FOIA's request from the US National Archives verify - DONE
 * Lawsuits paragraph - remove "30 most successful lawsuits" there is not way to determine if this is a fact, the word successful is vague, remove - DONE
 * What is secrecy news? Remove from article, as this seems to be an opinion, not a fact - DONE
 * Correct misspelling of Ladin to Laden - DONE
 * Contact the National Security Archives to verify Board of Directors are still accurate - DONE    The Governance listing in the "About" section on our website has been reviewed and any needed updating was done.  Here is a direct link to that section https://nsarchive.gwu.edu/about/governance             Thank you for your interest in the work of the National Security Archive.      Mary Curry, PhD, Public Service Coordinator / Research Associate
 * Contact National Security Archives to verify the annual budget amounts - DONE      The annual budget for the National Security Archive is approximately three million dollars.   Detailed financial information is posted on our website in its About section https://nsarchive.gwu.edu/about    under the heading Legal and Financial.        Thank you for your interest in the work of the National Security Archive.  Mary Curry, PhD, Public Service Coordinator / Research Associate
 * Add text under the Program areas to expand on the fact that the National Security Archives has a link on their main website to a Russian-language page of the archive. I am guessing it is related to their Russia/former Soviet Union program area. - DONE
 * Add text about Citizens for Responsibility and Ethics in Washington et al. v. Trump et al., case number 18-5150, in the United States Court of Appeals for the District of Columbia (CREW and National Security Archive v. Trump and EOP)  - DONE

Some last-minute peer review suggestions from tblack214:

The work you've done looks great, and the article looks to be improved a lot since we last looked it over. I'm happy to see that you flushed out that plagiarized section, and added some citations where they were missing or not provided at all. If I had to provide some last edits to make the page even better...


 * One more source to expand the Rosemary Award list. It's almost surprising that this doesn't have a page itself, and it sounds like an interesting project undertaken by the NSA.
 * If there have been any recent happenings in the lawsuit filed against Trump, it can be updated in the lawsuits section
 * Possibly add a citation link for the Unredacted blog, so people can easily find it

Otherwise, you've done good work with the article; it looks a lot cleaner now.