User:Ccreadingtime/Anatolian rug/Ekidd04 Peer Review

General info
Ccreadingtime
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ccreadingtime/Anatolian_rug?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anatolian_rug

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hello, I don't have as much to go on, but I'll still review what I've got to work with. I think you'd have an easier time going through and purging anything that seems to be biased, unclear, or your fact checking of statements proves something to be false. I feel as if doing that first will help you seem more clearly where more information can be added to help advance the article. Especially with an article that's more developed, like this one. Also I think you can keep the Transylvanian rug section, it's relevance is supported to its connection to the Ottoman empire. However, I think you could possibly cut down the subsection of "19th century: "Mecidi" style, and the Hereke court manufacture". Not removing it entirely, but simply summarizing it in simpler terms.

Hope this helps, good luck on your article.

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