User:Ccstacey3/Food Waste in Barcelona/Sarahprior8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ccstacey3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ccstacey3/Food_Waste_in_Barcelona?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Does Not Exist Yet

Evaluate the drafted changes
Critiques:


 * The article could benefit from more specific examples and data regarding food waste and food loss in Barcelona and Europe, as well as potential solutions to reduce waste.
 * While the article provides an overview of food loss and food waste, it may not delve deep enough into the complexities and nuances of these issues.
 * Some readers may want more information on the social and ethical implications of food waste beyond its environmental impact.
 * The article could have provided more sources and references to support its claims and statistics.

Positive Aspects:


 * The article provides a clear and concise overview of food loss and food waste, explaining the differences between the two and their implications.
 * It highlights the environmental impact of food waste, bringing attention to an important issue that many people may not be aware of.
 * The article discusses the efforts being made globally and in Europe to reduce food waste, demonstrating that action is being taken to address the problem.
 * It raises awareness of the scale of food waste in Barcelona, encouraging readers to consider their own role in reducing waste.