User:Ccthehorsie/Henry Bibb

Peer review:

The lead or the introductory/ biographical information regarding Henry Bibb have been updated. In addition, it alludes to information later detailed within the article: including his residence, his career work and family. The lead is cogent and written with detail. However, the article will benefit from more citations from sources when making a claim in the "content" sections. The article can also use a grammatical revision in certain areas with regards to punctuation--and sentence wordiness. The sources provided are good--all peer reviewed, reliable and are up to date. The Subheadings of the article (i.e. Letter from Henry Bibb to John Calkins) should be changed and/or included under a different heading--since it is not prominent enough to be its own heading. (the information provided can be included under legacy/biography sections. The picture, as well as caption, adhere to the Wikipedia's regulations--however, I would suggest either, the picture of the handcuffs under the slavery subsection, or including pictures for the other subsections to maintain coherence. ****