User:Ccurry24/Learned helplessness/SethBruder Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ccurry24


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ccurry24/Learned_helplessness?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Learned helplessness

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the later experiments section, you mentioned a 2011 study. I liked that you included a failed study to show that not all evidence was conclusive, but I feel like more context to the working of the experiment would be beneficial. In the depression section, you wrote "According to Steven Majer states that" which I believe is a typo; correct by either removing the "according to" or rewording the statement and removing the "states that". I like the direction the edits are taking from that point though. You can expand upon the depression section by expanding upon the credibility of Steven Maire, and if you were to research whether there is any research that opposes these findings. Overall, good edits so far!