User:Ccustodi/Grignard reaction/Berkeker.22 Peer Review

General info
Toady03 and Ccustodi
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Ccustodi/Grignard reaction
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Grignard reaction

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead has not been updated yet and it is overly detalied where maybe some details might not be necessary like talking about other metal reagents that doesnt relate to gringrads.

Content: there are two new contents made from the group where there is organocerium and organocupprate reagents but they are not gringrad reagents but another type of metal reagents so instead of confusing the reader maybe making a section called similar metal reagents like gringard can be made with links to their own pages.

tone and balance: content added is neutral.

Sources and References: 4 sources seem very little consideering how much is added. Links work.

Organization: the article includes images but the sandbox does not.

Overall impressions: This seems like a hard article to do due to mostly having the stuff it needs. I would suggest removing the stuff where other metal reagents are talked baout and instead make their own little section where their own wiki pages can be found. History maybe could be talked about and its importnace in the organic chemistry field.