User:Ccustodi/Grignard reaction/Cmsgarbi Peer Review

General info
Ccustodi, Toady03
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Ccustodi/Grignard reaction
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Grignard reaction

Evaluate the drafted changes
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- More citations in first paragraph

- liked how you are including picture of grignard reacting with acidic protons

- I would add a figure showing examples of protecting groups, as well as maybe find a link to a separate wiki page on those protecting groups

- lIked overview of other grignard like reactions

- Good neutral tone

- Overall I think it needs more citations, and an additional figure