User:Ccwonders/MURAL Festival/Aaaaaaaac123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ccwonders & StudentEditorWiki


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ccwonders/MURAL Festival


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * MURAL Festival

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added to the existing article was very relevant especially with the changes that occured due to the current pandemic. In fact, although Covid-19 was linked in the Mural Estival paragraph above, the word is repeated in the Murals subsection of the article. It would be useful to link the Covid-19, since this article will be referred to in the future and the reader might not go through the whole article. While we all know (to well!) about the current pandemic, the link could benefit readers that access this article in a few years from now.

As per Wikipedia's Etiquette, titles of exhibits of art pieces (for example) should be italicized rather than hyphened. Furthermore, artists' names should not be italicized, if I am not mistaken. Lastly, since two people were working on editing this article, the word Montreal should be consistently written in French or English rather than a mix of both. As a matter of fact, in the Leonard Cohen subsection, it appears written in 2 ways:

city of Montréal

City of Montréal

The article's writing should somewhat be uniform.

Typo to adjust:

(In Murals subsection) "on an outside wall of the Montreal's Jewish Hospital".

Overall, the information added and the sources used are great. Some minor changes will improve the quality and consistency of the article since two students ended up working on the same article. Great job and very interesting topic!