User:Cdb1220/Dietary indiscretion/Debm73 Peer Review

General info

 * Peer review of Cdb1220's article titled "Dietary indiscretion". Peer review by Debm73

Lead

 * Good strong and clear lead that introduces the topic well.

Content

 * Good amount of content.
 * Interesting content.
 * Adding statistics may help give the reader an idea of how common/uncommon the behaviour is.

Tone and Balance

 * Good neutral content.
 * Good tone and balance of the article.

Sources and References

 * Good amount of references.
 * Good scholarly sources.

Organization

 * Well organized and well written.

Images and Media

 * Nice images
 * May want to add a video clip of the behaviour to enhance the reader's understanding.

Overall impressions
Great well written draft with interesting content. Please "content" section as well as "images and media" section of the review to see how the article can be improved.