User:Cdh036/Health communication/Angeluztb Peer Review

General info
Cdh036
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Health communication - Wikipedia
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cdh036/Health communication - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Much of the edited changes for this article are in the "Literacy-communication gap" section. When cross-referencing with the current version of the topic article, the majority of the edits are additions to the content rather than grammatical or punctuational changes. There were challenges when comparing versions due to the manner in which the text was edited outside of Wikipedia and not directly on the platform, prompting a page-by-page comparison for editing. Additionally, many of the links and footnotes from the current article were absent in this draft, however, the addition of the content updates was provided with many citations and hyperlinks.

Outside of the section for the "Literacy-communication gap", there are not many visual changes in the provided sections for the "Historical campaigns" when compared to the source. Either the section has not been edited or updated but there are formatting changes that have been conducted which break consistency from the source, such as the paragraph subheadings.

All in all, this is a good start but needs much more work in fine-tuning the narrative tone of some of the paragraphs. Also, there are some citations that could benefit sources.