User:Cdmnt/Minor Feelings: An Asian American Reckoning/Pejotaele Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Cdmnt)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cdmnt/Minor Feelings: An Asian American Reckoning


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * It does not exist.

Evaluate the drafted changes
This looks like a very well researched article. All the references used come from recent, reliable academic sources and the book itself. As Cdmnt describes the content of the first two essays, she is very cautious not to express anything other than facts and examples used in the book. She never took a position towards the book and kept a neutral tone. The page is simple and well organized. The article as a whole is very relevant and current as the book came out in 2020. The lead presents a great introductory sentence and general description of what the book is about.

I found three extremely minimal spelling mistakes:


 * 1) In the first sentence of the second paragraph in the second essay; feeling s should have no "s".
 * 2) In the last sentence of the last paragraph in the second essay; Asian Americans is missing the last "s".

To strengthen the article, all 6 essays could be described in the content section but i can see it has been thought of.

All in all this new article is notorious, concise, easy to read and clear.