User:Cdobelta/Abercrombie & Fitch/Lapoferr Peer Review

General info
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 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Abercrombie & Fitch
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Relevance: The piece talks about a lot of things that are related to A&F, like its past, how its brand strategy has changed, controversies, store layouts, and its plans to grow internationally. It looks like each part adds to a full picture of the company's history, present situation, and how it works.

Neutrality and Bias: The story talks about both the good and bad things about A&F, indicating an attempt at neutrality. But the way these events are talked about can have a big effect on how biased they are seen to be.

Observation: The story seems to cover a lot of different points of view by talking about A&F's business plans, law and public problems, and changes to the company's rules. Make sure that both feedback and praise come from trustworthy sources. For overlooked points of view, check to see if there are any reliable sources or points of view that have been left out.