User:CeceliaOberts/Solar canopy/Jakeparvin Peer Review

General info

 * CeceliaOberts :https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CeceliaOberts/Solar_canopy?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Solar canopy

Evaluate the drafted changes
Well done. The information that was added improves the overall scope of the article. It allows the reader to gain information regarding the operation of solar canopies, specifically solar gazebos. The info that was added is also supported by credible sources and the tone is kept neutral. The main area for improvement in my opinion is word choice. The information that was added makes sense logically, but the word choice is not as clear as it could be. For example, instead of saying some studies, you could explain each study that was done on solar gazebos. If this is overwhelming (I'm not sure how many studies you've found) you could break it down into the type of study that is being conducted; Or if you were just to remove the word "some" and begin the sentence with "Studies", the sentence would be stronger and more credible. With that said, another issue I found with word choice is that you claimed that the studies have worked on developing solar gazebos which is slightly misleading. After looking at the references you have provided, it appears that the study regarding gazebos is introducing Rotating roof gazebos as a possible solution to barriers within the energy producing field but the study itself does not seem to be actively working to develop the technology. I'd suggest looking at some companies that have began developing this technology because it will allow you to be more specific about their development and then you can add info from relevant studies talking about the efficiency, feasibility of implementation, etc.. (This might give you more info to add to your edit, I found relevant info regarding this on frontiers website, heres the link) [https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fenrg.2021.680304/full#:~:text=like%20a%20cylinder.-,Electro%2DMechanic%20Structure%20of%20RRGS,rotation%20on%20the%20horizontal%20plane. https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fenrg.2021.680304/full#:~:text=like%20a%20cylinder.-,Electro%2DMechanic%20Structure%20of%20RRGS,rotation%20on%20the%20horizontal%20plane.]

Anyway, Overall you did a very good job, I hope these suggestions are helpful !