User:Cecemoseley/Mounir Fatmi/Abagge6 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)Cecemoseley/Mounir Fatmi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cecemoseley/Mounir_Fatmi?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mounir Fatmi

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I like the paraphrasing of his work in the first paragraph. In the original wiki page, it has a description of his work but not in this detail. I saw the note that it needs more citations and do agree.

I would like to see possible pictures of his work. there are only photos of himself on the page, I think adding pictures of his work and add more information about his art practice would make this page a lot better because it only has his achievements on the page. possibly adding his early childhood life, why he his creating work, etc..

Just more citations and research. If they artist is sponsored by the gallery, the gallery would have more resources like citations, articles, publishing's, etc...

Strong start though :)