User:Cecemoseley/Mounir Fatmi/Cbatem5 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mounir Fatmi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cecemoseley/Mounir_Fatmi?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mounir Fatmi

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article looks to be off to a good start. The article still needs sources to be verified and added. In the first section about Fatmi's early life, the first couple sentences should be rewritten in a more condensed form. Also the last section could be moved to the "Awards" section of the article. The "Career" section of the article is very well written and organized. I think more information could be added to the "Work" and "Awards" section. The sandbox information seems to be helpful and relevant, but just needs revising (as they have stated in the sandbox). Overall, this article is on its way to being very informational.