User:Cecemoseley/Mounir Fatmi/Jonahwebs Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mounir Fatmi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cecemoseley/Mounir_Fatmi?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mounir Fatmi

Evaluate the drafted changes
I can tell that my classmates assigned with this article have done extensive research into the career-long achievements and artworks of their artist. The existing article, while still very brief and insubstantial, is much longer and more detailed than many of the other assigned artists in the class. The Sandbox draft has a detailed list of many of the artist's works, as well as a general biography. Overall, this group is off to a very great start in creating an accessible purview of the artist's career.