User:Celebrations18!/Monkeypox virus/CraftWyvern Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Celebrations18!


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Celebrations18!/Monkeypox_virus?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Monkeypox

Evaluate the drafted changes
The proposed additions to the monkeypox article seem to give much relevant, necessary information to the article. I am very impressed with the quality of writing. The content, tone, balance and sources seemed perfect. I would recommend staying away from starting sentences with "and, " but other than that I am in favor of the next stage of writing.