User:Celina Garcia/Conflict Face-Negotiation Theory/ChristenCosat Peer Review

General info

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Evaluate the drafted changes
The introduction to the article does not lead with an explanation of the topic but rather when it was developed and by who. The remainder of the article he yet been edited but the lead does offer multiple aspects of the theory that can be expanded on. I think the lead could offer more concise information and leave for details to individual sections. -Christen Cosat