User:Celina Garcia/Conflict Face-Negotiation Theory/EllaRColley Peer Review

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Celina Garcia


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 * User:Celina Garcia/Conflict Face-Negotiation Theory


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Evaluate the drafted changes
This lead is very well detailed and thought out. I think some details may need to be taken out, however, as since it is just the lead more details will become available in the coming written parts. I think instead of putting so many details of what conflict face negotiation theory is, go into further explanation of the sections to come. The definition of face is not necessary, as that can be written about in the content section.