User:Celina Garcia/Conflict Face-Negotiation Theory/Kennedypowelll Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Celina Garcia


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Celina%20Garcia/Conflict_Face-Negotiation_Theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good start to the lead. There is a lot of valuable information listed but I think this article will need a better intro just to grab the readers attention. The lead gives a good idea of how this theory came to be and how it developed. It could also use more sources to prove that this is a reliable article.