User:Celina Garcia/Conflict Face-Negotiation Theory/Kurry72 Peer Review

The lead draft you have for Conflict Face Negotiation has a good description of the theory that goes over its origin and the key points and take a ways that you need while crafting the lead of an article. I believe the lead I well detailed with out letting it push into the other parts of the article that are yet to come. The only thing that I think is missing is a good strong first sentence that as the wiki training mentioned concisely and clearly describes the articles topic.

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