User:Celina Garcia/Conflict Face-Negotiation Theory/Sophiatroia Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Face Negotiation Theory


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Celina%20Garcia/Conflict_Face-Negotiation_Theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Celina%20Garcia/Conflict_Face-Negotiation_Theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: I think your group did a really great job on this lead. I see a definition for the theory and an informative introduction. The way you describe the definition of "face" made sense to the reader and it an important tool to understanding the rest of the content, too! The links all worked for me and I think they were great and relevant sources to include in the article. Although, there is only a lead, I think that this group is off to a great start. I would only change one thing; end the lead off with something definite though instead of leaving an open ended sentence: "Conflict Face-Negotiation theory shows ways in which individuals adapt and manage face in times of vulnerability." This could be seen as either a question or statement which is a little confusing going into the body. Overall, keeping a neutral tone throughout the article will really help too! Good job.

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