User:Celina Garcia/Conflict Face-Negotiation Theory/Yingtao Hanbao Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Celina Garcia, Laurenmyerson, Kenthecreator, Catcunningham1, Twetz02, Sarahabrams2001


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Celina%20Garcia/Conflict_Face-Negotiation_Theory?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
The paragraph in the lead is strong and does well to summarize Conflict Face-Negotiation Theory. However, I think a lot of that could go in a "history" section or at least in its own area after a leading sentence or sentences that describes Conflict Face-Negotiation Theory in a short description. the description of the concept of "face" could also go in a "key concepts" section, perhaps with other ideas from the theory. Basically, The content is good and well-written, but I think it could be split into multiple sections and then expounded on. It also looks like there is an issue with the citations at the bottom of the page. There is some missing information that could be fixed using the "cite" tool, and I think the first two are just links to the pages in the third citation, so those can probably be removed or compounded into one citation.