User:Celinaseguin/LaSalle, Ontario/Asant064 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Celinaseguin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Celinaseguin/LaSalle, Ontario


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * LaSalle, Ontario

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The content is well written, neutral in tone, and expands on the original article. It builds up the sections on education and culture from the original, while adding relevant information on sports and the community. The writing blends well with the original article, with the images used well to break up the text and add visual references.

While there are already a number of pictures, adding one of the strawberry festival, its location, or the beer festival would work well for the Festivals and Events section. The references were well integrated and reliable, but lacking in the education and festival sections. There are more references within the bibliography, so perhaps they just haven't been added yet, but that could be a place to reinforce. Otherwise, it is well written, neutral, and overall expands/improves the original article.