User:Celinaseguin/LaSalle, Ontario/Izzyadams Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Celinaseguin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Celinaseguin/LaSalle, Ontario


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * LaSalle, Ontario

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think you offer a lot of good information that adds to the already existing article. It definitely add to the article and is relevant information. The addition of images really helps balance out the amount of text well. There could be an addition of a photo of one of the festivals that are mentioned just to give more visual context, perhaps a picture of the mascot. The text is well divided into different sections and flows nicely. The information is neutral and does not seem to be bias. Something that could be expanded on is the history of the strawberry festival. The links work good and are up to date. In the already existing article there is mention of the festivals and schools thus if you plan to add it with the article it might sound a little repetitive. Perhaps figuring out how to incorporate the already existing information with yours might be useful.