User:Celinaseguin/LaSalle, Ontario/Macgoodwin13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Celinaseguin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Celinaseguin/LaSalle, Ontario
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * LaSalle, Ontario

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Good expansion of the article; a lot of new material is added which is detailed and adds to the article.

- Under "Culture and Recreation", consider revising the sentences "Events can also be hosted at the Vollmer Complex. These include birthday parties, vendor shows, baby showers, and sporting tournaments" as the flow between the two is rough and they could easily be converted into one sentence.

- Small numbers show be written out in sentences, such as "2" being switched to "two".

- A little too much detail in the "Community Sport" section. Specifying that the team plays at Rink A" does not really add to the article.

- References are solid and use of citations is well done.

- All images are well captioned and relevant.

- Information is up to date.