User:Celineanstey/Oopsacas minuta/Sprousm Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Celineanstey


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Celineanstey/Oopsacas_minuta?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall this looks really good just need a few more references. Everything is relevant and neutral, with no bias. All of the citation links worked for me that you have so far and the sources are all primary peer-reviewed articles. The quality of the writing was great and nothing was distracting. I believe it to meet all the wiki requirements, the only think I would suggest is to add a photo for extra credit.