User:Celinebean2000/Overseas Filipino Worker/Griib Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Peer review of Celinebean200


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Celinebean2000/Overseas Filipino Worker


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Overseas Filipino Worker

Evaluate the drafted changes
To be noted: there is a section about Female overseas Filipino workers on the article already, which I don't know if Celine is the author or if adding to the section. That also means that the section Female overseas Filipino Workers is included in the lead, but not the Impact on Mental Health sub section, so not to be forgotten. ;)

Hi Celine,

I believe the sections added and/or modified are relevant and help deal with the equity gap on Wikipedia as well as in line with what we are studying. I did not see in the talk section any suggestion of you to add the info you are working on to the main article. It could be a good idea to plant the seed and see what is being said.

It seems very well documented as all statements with statistics include a citation/reference.The fact that so many statistics are packed together makes it a little bit hard to read for me but it might be a personal struggle or a draft of the main sources with more to be added.

It might be interesting to look into any sources talking about the types of jobs the Filipina workers are qualified for and that they can't get?