User:Celinebean2000/Overseas Filipino Worker/Selena AHIS320 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Celinebean2000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Celinebean2000/Overseas Filipino Worker


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Overseas Filipino Worker

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hi Celine, it's an important article that you've chosen. I think the term definitely deserves the acknowledgment and recognition. So far, your section on women is well-written and concise.

I'm curious to see the section of mental health expanded and perhaps linking the same information to "Overseas Filipinos" article?