User:Cely0730

About Me
I come from Peru and I have been living in the states for about three years. I am currently working and attending school full-time. I like the challenge of learning new things, like reading. In fact, I have learned some of the English language by reading children’s books. I have quite a busy schedule, but there is always time to do some routines that help me to keep a positive energy, such as volleyball, soccer, and other activities related to sports. My goal in life is to contribute to the planet by reinforcing good behaviors in this society. In relation to my career and personality, I love to help, inspire, and encourage others to see a variety of possibilities to get better no matter who, where or in what situation we find ourselves in.

My Wikipedia Interests
Until recently, I did not trust Wikipedia as a credible source. I realized that my English instructor is right by saying that we can help to remove bias in these pages just by researching the topic and getting accurate information from other sources, as well as correcting grammar. I am interested in learning how to create a page for important people that may deserve one. For example, there may be unknown people or private organizations that positively impact the lives of many people.

Article Evaluation
I visited the Walking on Cars page on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: Is the article up-to-date?, is anything left out of the article that should be there? and Are any of the links dead?

Is the article up-to-date
Based on my research, I was able to determine that the Wikipedia page for Walking on Cars is not up to date. Although it was edited on November 30, 2019, there is information missing still. In the ‘History’ section, there is no information about their most recent album called “Colours”, which was released on April 12, 2019.

Anything left out
Also, the band had one of their songs called “Monster” appear in the Netflix series “The Stranger”, which debuted on January 30, 2020. There is no information regarding this event on the Wikipedia page. There is also no information on any singles that were released before the album came out or after the album came out. The ‘History’ section states that five school friends formed the band, but according to my research, there are only four members now. Although there is a link that tells us what happened to the fifth member of the band, the ‘History’ section does not have any information about this particular event, which happened in February of 2018.

Dead links
Finally, I was able to determine that there are some links on the Wikipedia page that are no longer working. One of the articles/references in regards to one of their singles called “Hand in Hand” is no longer available to view, as well as a link to the Irish Album Charts, and others. This tells me that the pages links have not been updated with each update to the page, as some of the sources/references are no longer active or are outdated.

Conclusion
I think this Wikipedia page doesn’t have an accurate information. There is a lot of information missing, the article is not up-to-date, the information about the fifth member of the band should be under history, and the dead links should be removed.