User:Cemcgee492/Structured writing/Mcwiki42 Peer Review

General info
Cemcgee492
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cemcgee492/Structured writing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Structured writing:

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead - I suggest keeping the wiki links to other articles in.

The new Components section is strong, concise, and helpful!

Maybe include a visual example of an information block.