User:Cemes4/Voltammetry/Basketball2023 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cemes4


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cemes4/Voltammetry?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The content seems fairly concise without getting too specific

Content is also quite neutral

Also some of the writing can be condensed a little bit by using concepts from the Brogan textbook.

Moreover, some references should be included in the paragraphs.