User:Cemes4/Voltammetry/Siluna Peer Review

General info

 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cemes4/Voltammetry?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Voltammetry

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content being drafted appears to be appropriately thorough. But I am not familiar with this subject, and I found it difficult to read and understand.


 * The language itself is fine in terms of clarity, although it feels a bit unapproachable. Some concepts such as "electrochemical cells" could use either a brief explanation or a link to the related Wikipedia article. e.g. electrochemical cell → Electrochemical cell
 * But, the theory section is in great need of subheaders to communicate structure and break up the Great Wall of Text™. This is the easiest way to improve clarity.

Other feedback:


 * The second paragraph ("Electrochemical cells are used in voltammetric experiments...") looks too stuffed, and could be broken up and elaborated on to make it more digestible for the average person.
 * As noted by the contributors, figures and equations are needed to explain many of the concepts.
 * If the "Types of Voltammetry" subsection can be broken up into categories, that would also be great.